Chp 5 Page 21

posted July 29th, 2011, 1:01 pm


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July 29th, 2011, 1:01 pm

Omegasama

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Next page is the last page for this chapter... Then I have finished 5 chapters and is starting my 6th.

I am thinking about redrawing the first chapter completely.

Should I?

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July 29th, 2011, 1:37 pm

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I really like her cape.
All the clothes in this comic are pretty.

Edit : I personally think the first chapter looks fine, but if you want to redraw it, there's no harm in it.

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July 29th, 2011, 6:07 pm

Parkchester

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Nope. Leave it be,bro. Once you start redoing and redoing it never ends. The art is good enough in chapter one to be left alone. It also shows your progress.

If anything I might review the dialog in chapter one, since its far more bothersome to me. But i'd recommend you just keep pushing forward.

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July 30th, 2011, 12:36 am

:3 (Guest)

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agree with Parkchester. Think of it as proof that your progressing with your art, and besides I really like chapter 1.

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July 30th, 2011, 7:02 am

P4PunkKanji

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it's up to u buuuut i think it looks awesome :)

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July 31st, 2011, 12:25 pm

HamsterMasterSamster (Guest)

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Agree with Parkchester pretty much entirely. The art in Ch1 is fine - obviously you are improving as you go! But Ch1 is still well within tolerance levels from a viewer perspective ;)

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August 2nd, 2011, 9:27 pm

SarahGWood

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no, not his "ow brother!"

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August 6th, 2011, 11:19 am

Elvenboyslut

Redraw

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There's a great history of your progress as an artist and a storyteller if you keep moving forward. I say don't worry about it and keep looking ahead.

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