Ch 3 page 8

posted January 14th, 2011, 6:52 pm


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January 15th, 2011, 9:45 am

Elvenboyslut

Nice work

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Nice timing and a good example of pushing the reader onto the next page.

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January 18th, 2011, 12:38 pm

Tempestuous (Guest)

Well done!

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I am loving this story and was instantly drawn into the characters, their personalities and their personal stories as well. More! More! Bravo!!!

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